:: mike errico diary ::

:: Saturday, June 2, 2007 ::

An interesting video treatment idea came in. Whattya think?:


"Ever Since".....thats the one!
I had a vision of the video.

Check this out!

Village subway station.
You are an out of work artist, drawing people in the subway for money.
When you are not working you spend your time drawing your dream girl.
One day you hold the picture to the subway headlight and....Viola... she walks off the train.
You chase her, but lose her. You rush back to your studio to look at all the other pics of her,
hoping to find a clue as to where she goes. You wait everyday in the same place for
her...drawing her....she never returns.

(Scene change) Second verse

Your dream girl is on the train with a an artists pad she is an artist as well, drawing her
dream guy, the pic is you. Her train stops at your station. You are both too involved with
drawing that you don't look up. The door closes. Suddenly you notice each other as the train
pulls away. Its too late

(second bridge/ chorus)

She holds her picture up against the window...its a picture you and and her.
You do the same. You had both been drawing yourself into the pictures. That day.

(Musical interlude)

(Slow motion)
Subway wind blows your pictures down the tracks....you watch as they fade into the distance
being pulled away by the subway wind.

( Last bridge/ chorus)
She gets off the next stop...
She i looking down the tracks. The wind catches her hair, she see the pictures blowing
toward her. She starts gathering them....as she is picking up the pictures, the next train
comes in.
There you are on the train holding a picture of you and her against the window.

Its a hit bro! You should push that tune. I like it more each time i hear it.

I am never wrong. Im just always a day late and a dollar short.
:: mike 11:23 AM [+] ::